doc: improve 20.09 release notes

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Desktop Enironments:
Desktop Environments:
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gnome3: 3.34 -> 3.36, see its <link xlink:href="https://help.gnome.org/misc/release-notes/3.36/">release notes</link>.
gnome3: 3.34 -> 3.36, see its <link xlink:href="https://help.gnome.org/misc/release-notes/3.36/">release notes</link>
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NixOS now distributes an official <link xlink:href="https://nixos.org/download.html#nixos-iso">GNOME ISO</link>.
NixOS now distributes an official <link xlink:href="https://nixos.org/download.html#nixos-iso">GNOME ISO</link>
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<para>
Agda ecosystem was heavily reworked (see more details below).
Agda ecosystem was heavily reworked (see more details below)
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PHP now defaults to PHP 7.4, updated from 7.3.
PHP now defaults to PHP 7.4, updated from 7.3
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PHP 7.2 is no longer supported due to upstream not supporting this version for the entire lifecycle of the 20.09 release.
PHP 7.2 is no longer supported due to upstream not supporting this version for the entire lifecycle of the 20.09 release
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Python 3 now defaults to Python 3.8 instead of 3.7.
Python 3 now defaults to Python 3.8 instead of 3.7
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<para>
Python 3.5 has reached its upstream EOL at the end of September 2020: it
has been removed from the list of available packages.
Python 3.5 reached its upstream EOL at the end of September 2020: it
has been removed from the list of available packages
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Support for built-in LCDs in various pieces of Logitech hardware (keyboards and USB speakers). <varname>hardware.logitech.lcd.enable</varname> enables support for all hardware supported by the g15daemon project.
Support for built-in LCDs in various pieces of Logitech hardware (keyboards and USB speakers). <varname>hardware.logitech.lcd.enable</varname> enables support for all hardware supported by the <link xlink:href="https://sourceforge.net/projects/g15daemon/">g15daemon project</link>.
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allows to restrict non-default entries in the boot menu to one or more
users. The users and passwords are defined via the option
<option>boot.loader.grub.users</option>.
Note: Password support is only avaiable in GRUB version 2.
Note: Password support is only available in GRUB version 2.
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<xref linkend="opt-hardware.system76.firmware-daemon.enable" /> adds easy support of system76 firmware.
<xref linkend="opt-hardware.system76.firmware-daemon.enable" /> adds easy support of system76 firmware
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<xref linkend="opt-hardware.uinput.enable" /> loads uinput kernel module.
<xref linkend="opt-hardware.uinput.enable" /> loads uinput kernel module
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<xref linkend="opt-hardware.video.hidpi.enable" /> enable good defaults for HiDPI displays.
<xref linkend="opt-hardware.video.hidpi.enable" /> enable good defaults for HiDPI displays
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<xref linkend="opt-hardware.wooting.enable" /> support for Wooting keyboards.
<xref linkend="opt-hardware.wooting.enable" /> support for Wooting keyboards
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<xref linkend="opt-hardware.xpadneo.enable" /> xpadneo driver for Xbox One wireless controllers.
<xref linkend="opt-hardware.xpadneo.enable" /> xpadneo driver for Xbox One wireless controllers
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<xref linkend="opt-programs.hamster.enable" /> enable hamster time tracking.
<xref linkend="opt-programs.hamster.enable" /> enable hamster time tracking
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<xref linkend="opt-programs.steam.enable" /> adds easy enablement of steam and related system configuration.
<xref linkend="opt-programs.steam.enable" /> adds easy enablement of steam and related system configuration
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<xref linkend="opt-security.doas.enable" /> alternative to sudo, allows non-root users to execute commands as root.
<xref linkend="opt-security.doas.enable" /> alternative to sudo, allows non-root users to execute commands as root
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<xref linkend="opt-security.tpm2.enable" /> add Trusted Platform Module 2 support.
<xref linkend="opt-security.tpm2.enable" /> add Trusted Platform Module 2 support
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<xref linkend="opt-boot.initrd.network.openvpn.enable" /> Start an OpenVPN client during initrd boot.
<xref linkend="opt-boot.initrd.network.openvpn.enable" /> start an OpenVPN client during initrd boot
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<xref linkend="opt-boot.enableContainers" /> Use nixos-containers.
<xref linkend="opt-boot.enableContainers" /> use nixos-containers
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-virtualisation.oci-containers.containers" /> Run OCI (Docker) containers.
<xref linkend="opt-virtualisation.oci-containers.containers" /> run OCI (Docker) containers
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<xref linkend="opt-virtualisation.podman.enable" /> Daemonless container engine.
<xref linkend="opt-virtualisation.podman.enable" /> daemonless container engine
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<xref linkend="opt-services.ankisyncd.enable" /> Anki sync server.
<xref linkend="opt-services.ankisyncd.enable" /> Anki sync server
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<xref linkend="opt-services.bazarr.enable" /> subtitle manager for Sonarr and Radarr.
<xref linkend="opt-services.bazarr.enable" /> Subtitle manager for Sonarr and Radarr
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<xref linkend="opt-services.biboumi.enable" /> Biboumi XMPP gateway to IRC.
<xref linkend="opt-services.biboumi.enable" /> Biboumi XMPP gateway to IRC
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<xref linkend="opt-services.blockbook-frontend" /> Blockbook-frontend, a service for the Trezor wallet.
<xref linkend="opt-services.blockbook-frontend" /> Blockbook-frontend, a service for the Trezor wallet
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<xref linkend="opt-services.cage.enable" /> Wayland cage service.
<xref linkend="opt-services.cage.enable" /> Wayland cage service
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<xref linkend="opt-services.convos.enable" /> IRC daemon, which can be accessed throught the browser.
<xref linkend="opt-services.convos.enable" /> IRC daemon, which can be accessed throught the browser
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<xref linkend="opt-services.engelsystem.enable" /> Tool for coordinating helpers and shifts on large events.
<xref linkend="opt-services.engelsystem.enable" /> Tool for coordinating volunteers and shifts on large events
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<xref linkend="opt-services.espanso.enable" /> text-expander written in rust.
<xref linkend="opt-services.espanso.enable" /> text-expander written in rust
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<xref linkend="opt-services.foldingathome.enable" /> Folding@home client.
<xref linkend="opt-services.foldingathome.enable" /> Folding@home client
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<xref linkend="opt-services.foldingathome.enable" /> Folding@home client.
<xref linkend="opt-services.gerrit.enable" /> Web-based team code collaboration tool
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.gerrit.enable" /> Web-based team code collaboration tool.
<xref linkend="opt-services.go-neb.enable" /> Matrix bot
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<xref linkend="opt-services.go-neb.enable" /> Matrix bot.
<xref linkend="opt-services.hardware.xow.enable" /> xow as a systemd service
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<xref linkend="opt-services.hardware.xow.enable" /> xow as a systemd service.
<xref linkend="opt-services.hercules-ci-agent.enable" /> Hercules CI build agent
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.hercules-ci-agent.enable" /> Hercules CI build agent.
<xref linkend="opt-services.jicofo.enable" /> Jitsi Conference Focus, component of Jitsi Meet
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.jicofo.enable" /> Jitsi Conference Focus, component of Jitsi Meet.
<xref linkend="opt-services.jirafeau.enable" /> A web file repository
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<xref linkend="opt-services.jirafeau.enable" /> a web file repository.
<xref linkend="opt-services.jitsi-meet.enable" /> Secure, simple and scalable video conferences
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.jitsi-meet.enable" /> secure, simple and scalable video conferences.
<xref linkend="opt-services.jitsi-videobridge.enable" /> Jitsi Videobridge, a WebRTC compatible router
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.jitsi-videobridge.enable" /> Jitsi Videobridge, a WebRTC compatible router.
<xref linkend="opt-services.jupyterhub.enable" /> Jupyterhub development server
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.jupyterhub.enable" /> Jupyterhub development server.
<xref linkend="opt-services.k3s.enable" /> Lightweight Kubernetes distribution
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<xref linkend="opt-services.k3s.enable" /> lightweight kubernetes distribution.
<xref linkend="opt-services.magic-wormhole-mailbox-server.enable" /> Magic Wormhole Mailbox Server
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.magic-wormhole-mailbox-server.enable" /> Magic Wormhole Mailbox Server.
<xref linkend="opt-services.malcontent.enable" /> Parental Control support
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<xref linkend="opt-services.malcontent.enable" /> parental control support.
<xref linkend="opt-services.matrix-appservice-discord.enable" /> Matrix and Discord bridge
</para>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.matrix-appservice-discord.enable" /> Matrix and Discord bridge.
<xref linkend="opt-services.mautrix-telegram.enable" /> Matrix-Telegram puppeting/relaybot bridge
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.mautrix-telegram.enable" /> Matrix-Telegram puppeting/relaybot bridge.
<xref linkend="opt-services.mirakurun.enable" /> Japanese DTV Tuner Server Service
</para>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.mirakurun.enable" /> Japanese DTV Tuner Server Service.
<xref linkend="opt-services.molly-brown.enable" /> Molly-Brown Gemini server
</para>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.molly-brown.enable" /> Molly-Brown Gemini server.
<xref linkend="opt-services.mullvad-vpn.enable" /> Mullvad VPN daemon
</para>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.mullvad-vpn.enable" /> Mullvad VPN daemon.
<xref linkend="opt-services.ncdns.enable" /> Namecoin to DNS bridge
</para>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.ncdns.enable" /> Namecoin to DNS bridge.
<xref linkend="opt-services.nextdns.enable" /> NextDNS to DoH Proxy service
</para>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.nextdns.enable" /> NextDNS to DoH Proxy service.
<xref linkend="opt-services.nix-store-gcs-proxy" /> Google storage bucket to be used as a nix store
</para>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.nix-store-gcs-proxy" /> Enable a Google storage bucket to be used as a nix store.
<xref linkend="opt-services.onedrive.enable" /> OneDrive sync service
</para>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.onedrive.enable" /> OneDrive sync service.
<xref linkend="opt-services.pinnwand.enable" /> Pastebin-like service
</para>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.pinnwand.enable" /> Pastebin-like service.
<xref linkend="opt-services.pixiecore.enable" /> Manage network booting of machines
</para>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.pixiecore.enable" /> manage network booting of machines.
<xref linkend="opt-services.privacyidea.enable" /> Privacy authentication server
</para>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.privacyidea.enable" /> Privacy authentication server.
<xref linkend="opt-services.quorum.enable" /> Quorum blockchain daemon
</para>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.quorum.enable" /> Quorum blockchain daemon.
<xref linkend="opt-services.robustirc-bridge.enable" /> RobustIRC bridge
</para>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.robustirc-bridge.enable" /> RobustIRC bridge.
<xref linkend="opt-services.rss-bridge.enable" /> Generate RSS and Atom feeds
</para>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.rss-bridge.enable" /> generate RSS and Atom feeds.
<xref linkend="opt-services.rtorrent.enable" /> rTorrent service
</para>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.rtorrent.enable" /> rTorrent service.
<xref linkend="opt-services.smartdns.enable" /> SmartDNS DNS server
</para>
</listitem>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.smartdns.enable" /> SmartDNS DNS server.
<xref linkend="opt-services.sogo.enable" /> SOGo groupware
</para>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.sogo.enable" /> SOGo groupware.
<xref linkend="opt-services.teeworlds.enable" /> Teeworlds game server
</para>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.teeworlds.enable" /> Teeworlds game server.
<xref linkend="opt-services.torque.mom.enable" /> torque computing node
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<xref linkend="opt-services.torque.mom.enable" /> torque computing node.
<xref linkend="opt-services.torque.server.enable" /> torque server
</para>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.torque.server.enable" /> enable torque server.
<xref linkend="opt-services.tuptime.enable" /> A total uptime service
</para>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.tuptime.enable" /> a total uptime service.
<xref linkend="opt-services.urserver.enable" /> X11 remote server
</para>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.urserver.enable" /> X11 remote server.
<xref linkend="opt-services.wasabibackend.enable" /> Wasabi backend service
</para>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.wasabibackend.enable" /> Wasabi backend service.
<xref linkend="opt-services.yubikey-agent.enable" /> Yubikey agent
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.yubikey-agent.enable" /> Yubikey agent.
</para>
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<para>
<xref linkend="opt-services.zigbee2mqtt.enable" /> Zigbee to MQTT bridge.
<xref linkend="opt-services.zigbee2mqtt.enable" /> Zigbee to MQTT bridge
</para>
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<para>
I, Jonathan Ringer, would also like to personally thank @WORLDofPEACE for their help in mentoring me on the release process. Special thanks also goes to Thomas Tuegel for helping immensely with stabilizing Qt, kde, and Plasma5; I would also like to thank Robert Scott for his numerous fixes and pull request reviews.
I, Jonathan Ringer, would also like to personally thank @WORLDofPEACE for their help in mentoring me on the release process. Special thanks also goes to Thomas Tuegel for helping immensely with stabilizing Qt, KDE, and Plasma5; I would also like to thank Robert Scott for his numerous fixes and pull request reviews.
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default = false;
example = true;
description = ''
Whether to enable engelsystem, an online tool for coordinating helpers
Whether to enable engelsystem, an online tool for coordinating volunteers
and shifts on large events.
'';
type = lib.types.bool;

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meta = with stdenv.lib; {
description =
"Coordinate your helpers in teams, assign them to work shifts or let them decide for themselves when and where they want to help with what";
"Coordinate your volunteers in teams, assign them to work shifts or let them decide for themselves when and where they want to help with what";
license = licenses.gpl2;
homepage = "https://engelsystem.de";
maintainers = with maintainers; [ kloenk ];